From cd2b831bc654e3673ac4a24bb2c18595a8024835 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: saml33 <slam.uke@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 10 Aug 2021 22:18:44 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] copy for redeem page

---
 components/ContentSectionRedeem.tsx | 77 ++++++++++++++---------------
 components/HeroSectionRedeem.tsx    | 15 +++---
 components/RedeemModal.tsx          |  3 +-
 3 files changed, 48 insertions(+), 47 deletions(-)

diff --git a/components/ContentSectionRedeem.tsx b/components/ContentSectionRedeem.tsx
index b3888fd..57ecfcd 100644
--- a/components/ContentSectionRedeem.tsx
+++ b/components/ContentSectionRedeem.tsx
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@ const ContentSectionRedeem = () => {
           <div className="max-w-7xl mx-auto py-16">
             <div className="max-w-4xl mb-24 mx-auto text-center">
               <h2 className="mb-4 text-3xl md:text-4xl lg:text-4xl text-white font-bold font-heading">
-                Now what?
+                A new journey begins...
               </h2>
               <p className="text-xl md:text-2xl lg:text-2xl text-white text-opacity-70">
-                The journey has just begun, here&apos;s what happens next
+                Here&apos;s what happens next.
               </p>
             </div>
             <section className="">
@@ -24,22 +24,19 @@ const ContentSectionRedeem = () => {
                     <div className="py-4 px-8 mt-3">
                       <div className="flex flex-col mb-8">
                         <h2 className="text-white font-semibold text-xl tracking-wide mb-2">
-                          With power comes great responsibility
+                          With power comes great responsibility.
                         </h2>
+                        <p className="mb-2 text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
+                          Mango is the first DAO on solana to use on-chain
+                          governance and as MNGO holders we all have a stake in
+                          driving the future of Mango. The governance mechanism
+                          is already functional and MNGO tokens are used to both
+                          bring proposals to the DAO and vote on said proposals.
+                        </p>
                         <p className="text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
-                          Mango is the first DAO on Solana to use on-chain
-                          governance, this is a big step towrds complete
-                          decentralization. It means that founding members do
-                          not control the DAO, the DAO is actually controlled by
-                          all of us; the MNGO holders.
-                          <br />
-                          <br />
-                          As MNGO holders our highest responsibility is to
-                          command and protect the DAO and it&apos;s value.
-                          Holders have the responsibility to make the rules and
-                          decide on the protocols future. Together we will build
-                          the constitution, together we will push for progress,
-                          together we will grow the protocol.{' '}
+                          There&apos;ll be kinks to iron out as we get up and
+                          running but as DAO members, we are all in this
+                          together. Cementing the Mango Constitution on-chain.
                         </p>
                       </div>
                     </div>
@@ -50,18 +47,18 @@ const ContentSectionRedeem = () => {
                     <div className="py-4 px-8 mt-3">
                       <div className="flex flex-col mb-8">
                         <h2 className="text-white font-semibold text-xl tracking-wide mb-2">
-                          MNGO in the pool?
+                          Life is cool in the Raydium pool.
                         </h2>
+                        <p className="mb-2 text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
+                          The plan is to launch Mango v3 with MNGO as one of the
+                          tradable assets. To do this, we need the liquidity for
+                          MNGO to be somewhere close to other assets traded on
+                          Serum DEX.
+                        </p>
                         <p className="text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
-                          We all want MNGO to be traded on Mango V3 at launch.
-                          This means MNGO needs liquidity on-par with other top
-                          traded tokens on serum. There are no backroom deals,
-                          no one officially to make markets for us.
-                          <br />
-                          <br />
-                          We will be creating a Raydium pool with incentives to
-                          help provide initial liquidity but we also need the
-                          community to add liquidity to the pool and orderbooks.
+                          As no deals were done with market makers to provide
+                          liquidity, it will be up to MNGO holders to jump in
+                          the Raydium pool and create liquidity for MNGO.
                         </p>
                       </div>
                     </div>
@@ -75,14 +72,19 @@ const ContentSectionRedeem = () => {
                     <div className="py-4 px-8 mt-3">
                       <div className="flex flex-col mb-8">
                         <h2 className="text-white font-semibold text-xl tracking-wide mb-2">
-                          MNGO holder &amp; maker of markets
+                          Mango Market Makers United.
                         </h2>
-                        <p className="text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
-                          Provide liquidity on the upcoming perp markets, the
-                          DAO will vote on liquidity incentives for perp
-                          markets,
+                        <p className="mb-2 text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
+                          Become a market maker and provide liquidity on the
+                          Mango v3 perp markets (coming soon). Get started with
+                          our example market making bot. Bonus points if you can
+                          deploy it on-chain.
                         </p>
-                        <LinkLeft>link to SDK</LinkLeft>
+                        <p className="mb-4 text-white text-opacity-70 text-base">
+                          There&apos;ll be a DAO proposal to decide on liquidity
+                          incentives for market making on Mango v3.
+                        </p>
+                        <LinkLeft className="mb-2">link to SDK</LinkLeft>
                         <LinkLeft>link to docs with devnet tutorial</LinkLeft>
                       </div>
                     </div>
@@ -117,21 +119,18 @@ const ContentSectionRedeem = () => {
               <div className="pt-10 pb-12 px-6 sm:pt-16 sm:px-16 lg:py-16 lg:pr-0 xl:py-20 xl:px-20 h-350">
                 <div className="lg:self-center">
                   <h2 className="text-3xl font-extrabold text-white sm:text-4xl">
-                    <span className="block">Join the Discord</span>
+                    <span className="block">Join us on Discord.</span>
                   </h2>
                   <p className="mt-4 text-xl leading-6 text-white text-opacity-50">
-                    Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed
-                    do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna
-                    aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation
-                    ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.{' '}
+                    The official Mango community lives on Discord.
                   </p>
                   <div className="py-8">
                     <a
                       rel="noreferrer"
                       target="_blank"
-                      href="https://trade.mango.markets"
+                      href="https://discord.gg/67jySBhxrgs"
                     >
-                      <Button>Start trading now</Button>
+                      <Button>Get Involved</Button>
                     </a>
                   </div>
                 </div>
diff --git a/components/HeroSectionRedeem.tsx b/components/HeroSectionRedeem.tsx
index c6618f1..49a81fe 100644
--- a/components/HeroSectionRedeem.tsx
+++ b/components/HeroSectionRedeem.tsx
@@ -6,13 +6,16 @@ const HeroSectionRedeem = () => {
       <div className="flex flex-col md:flex-row lg:flex-row m-10 mx-auto gap-6 items-center">
         <div className="flex-1 px-4">
           <h2 className="mb-4 text-3xl md:text-5xl lg:text-5xl text-white font-bold font-heading">
-            The event has ended. <br />
-            It’s time to redeem your&nbsp;
-            <GradientText>$MNGO</GradientText>
+            That&apos;s a wrap.
+            <br />
+            <GradientText>MNGO</GradientText> is ready.
           </h2>
-          <p className="text-xl md:text-2xl lg:text-2xl text-white text-opacity-70">
-            Thank you for your contributions, soon you will be able to help
-            decide the future of Mango.
+          <p className="mb-2 text-xl text-white text-opacity-70">
+            Thank you to everyone who participated in the sale.
+          </p>
+          <p className="text-xl text-white text-opacity-70">
+            You are now valued members of the Mango DAO. Let&apos;s shape the
+            future of Mango together.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div className="flex-1 my-5 z-10">
diff --git a/components/RedeemModal.tsx b/components/RedeemModal.tsx
index 1c8f65b..21123a6 100644
--- a/components/RedeemModal.tsx
+++ b/components/RedeemModal.tsx
@@ -76,8 +76,7 @@ const RedeemModal = () => {
         <div className="pb-4 text-center">
           {!submitting ? (
             <>
-              <h2>Redeem your MNGO.</h2>
-              <p>Welcome to the DAO, let&apos;s build together.</p>
+              <h2>Redeem your MNGO</h2>
             </>
           ) : null}