diff --git a/zip-1014.rst b/zip-1014.rst
index 4babfea2..1f649327 100644
--- a/zip-1014.rst
+++ b/zip-1014.rst
@@ -201,10 +201,10 @@ The funds SHALL be received and administered by ZF. ZF MUST disburse them as
    substantial (current or prospective) continual existence, and set them up
    for long-term success, subject to the usual grant award considerations
    (impact, ability, risks, team, cost-effectiveness, etc.). Priority SHOULD be
-   given to Major Grants that support ecosystem growth through mentorship,
-   coaching, technical resources, creating entrepreneurial opportunities, etc.
-   If one proposal substantially duplicates another's plans, priority SHOULD be
-   given to the originator of the plans.
+   given to Major Grants that support ecosystem growth, for example through
+   mentorship, coaching, technical resources, creating entrepreneurial
+   opportunities, etc. If one proposal substantially duplicates another's
+   plans, priority SHOULD be given to the originator of the plans.
 
 4. Major Grants SHOULD be restricted to furthering the Zcash cryptocurrency and
    its ecosystem (which is more specific than furthering financial privacy in