diff --git a/zip-0316.rst b/zip-0316.rst index 7e08365e..b2125c9d 100644 --- a/zip-0316.rst +++ b/zip-0316.rst @@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ Consumer that it is given. Sender A wallet or other software that can send transfers of assets, or other - consensus state side-effects defined in future. Senders are a subset of - Consumers. + side effects to consensus state that may be defined in future. Senders are a + subset of Consumers. Receiver The necessary information to transfer an asset to a Recipient that generated that Receiver using a specific Transfer Protocol. Each Receiver is associated @@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ Orchard Receiver. The raw encoding of a Unified Address is a concatenation of :math:`(\mathtt{typecode}, \mathtt{length}, \mathtt{addr})` encodings -of the consituent Receivers, in ascending order of Typecode: +of the constituent Receivers, in ascending order of Typecode: * :math:`\mathtt{typecode} : \mathtt{compactSize}` — the Typecode from the above Priority List; @@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ The following FVK or IVK Encodings are used in place of the :math:`\mathtt{addr}` field: * An Orchard FVK or IVK Encoding, with Typecode :math:`\mathtt{0x03},` is - is the raw encoding of the Orchard Full Viewing Key or Orchard Incoming + the raw encoding of the Orchard Full Viewing Key or Orchard Incoming Viewing Key respectively. * A Sapling FVK Encoding, with Typecode :math:`\mathtt{0x02},` is the @@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ Rationale for making Revision 0 UA/UVKs with MUST-understand Typecodes invalid Click to show/hide A Consumer implementing this ZIP prior to `Revision 1`_ will not -recognize the Human-Readable Parts beginning with “``ur``” that mark a +recognise the Human-Readable Parts beginning with “``ur``” that mark a `Revision 1`_ UA/UVK. So if a UA/UVK that includes MUST-understand Typecodes is required to use these `Revision 1`_ HRPs, this will ensure that the MUST-understand specification is correctly enforced even for diff --git a/zip-0317.rst b/zip-0317.rst index 54dfce0e..848fd758 100644 --- a/zip-0317.rst +++ b/zip-0317.rst @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ to the value of a transaction fee that is conventionally used by wallets, and that a user can reasonably expect miners on the Zcash network to accept for including a transaction in a block. -The terms "Mainnet, "Testnet", and "zatoshi" in this document are defined +The terms "Mainnet", "Testnet", and "zatoshi" in this document are defined as in [#protocol-networks]_.