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Co-authored-by: Daira Hopwood <daira@jacaranda.org>

zcash_primitives/src/transaction/mod.rs

@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ impl Transaction {
 
 #[derive(Clone)]
 pub struct TransparentDigests<A> {
-    pub prevout_digest: A,
+    pub prevouts_digest: A,
     pub sequence_digest: A,
     pub outputs_digest: A,
 }

zcash_primitives/src/transaction/sighash_v5.rs

@@ -38,6 +38,7 @@ fn hasher(personal: &[u8; 16]) -> State {
 }
 
 /// Implements [ZIP 244 section S.2](https://zips.z.cash/zip-0244#s-2-transparent-sig-digest)
+/// but only when used to produce the hash for a signature over a transparent input.
 fn transparent_sig_digest<A: TransparentAuthorizingContext>(
     txid_digests: &TransparentDigests<Blake2bHash>,
     bundle: &transparent::Bundle<A>,
@@ -48,39 +49,33 @@ fn transparent_sig_digest<A: TransparentAuthorizingContext>(
     let flag_single = hash_type & SIGHASH_MASK == SIGHASH_SINGLE;
     let flag_none = hash_type & SIGHASH_MASK == SIGHASH_NONE;
 
-    let prevout_digest = if flag_anyonecanpay {
+    let prevouts_digest = if flag_anyonecanpay {
         transparent_prevout_hash::<A>(&[])
     } else {
-        txid_digests.prevout_digest
+        txid_digests.prevouts_digest
     };
 
     let amounts_digest = {
         let mut h = hasher(ZCASH_TRANSPARENT_AMOUNTS_HASH_PERSONALIZATION);
-        Array::write(
-            &mut h,
-            if flag_anyonecanpay {
-                vec![]
-            } else {
-                bundle.authorization.input_amounts()
-            },
-            |w, amount| w.write_all(&amount.to_i64_le_bytes()),
-        )
+        if !flag_anyonecanpay {
+            Array::write(&mut h, bundle.authorization.input_amounts(), |w, amount| {
+                w.write_all(&amount.to_i64_le_bytes())
+            })
             .unwrap();
+        }
         h.finalize()
     };
 
     let scripts_digest = {
         let mut h = hasher(ZCASH_TRANSPARENT_SCRIPTS_HASH_PERSONALIZATION);
+        if !flag_anyonecanpay {
             Array::write(
                 &mut h,
-            if flag_anyonecanpay {
-                vec![]
-            } else {
-                bundle.authorization.input_scriptpubkeys()
-            },
+                bundle.authorization.input_scriptpubkeys(),
                 |w, script| script.write(w),
             )
             .unwrap();
+        }
         h.finalize()
     };
 
@@ -106,11 +101,10 @@ fn transparent_sig_digest<A: TransparentAuthorizingContext>(
         txid_digests.outputs_digest
     };
 
-    // If we are serializing an input (i.e. this is not a JoinSplit signature hash):
-    //   a. outpoint (32-byte hash + 4-byte little endian)
-    //   b. scriptCode of the input (serialized as scripts inside CTxOuts)
-    //   c. value of the output spent by this input (8-byte little endian)
-    //   d. nSequence of the input (4-byte little endian)
+    //S.2g.i:   prevout      (field encoding)
+    //S.2g.ii:  value        (8-byte signed little-endian)
+    //S.2g.iii: scriptPubKey (field encoding)
+    //S.2g.iv:  nSequence    (4-byte unsigned little-endian)
     let mut ch = hasher(ZCASH_TRANSPARENT_INPUT_HASH_PERSONALIZATION);
     if let SignableInput::Transparent {
         index,
@@ -125,16 +119,16 @@ fn transparent_sig_digest<A: TransparentAuthorizingContext>(
         script_pubkey.write(&mut ch).unwrap();
         ch.write_u32::<LittleEndian>(txin.sequence).unwrap();
     }
-    let per_input_digest = ch.finalize();
+    let txin_sig_digest = ch.finalize();
 
     let mut h = hasher(ZCASH_TRANSPARENT_HASH_PERSONALIZATION);
     h.write_all(&[hash_type]).unwrap();
-    h.write_all(prevout_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
+    h.write_all(prevouts_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
     h.write_all(amounts_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
     h.write_all(scripts_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
     h.write_all(sequence_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
     h.write_all(outputs_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
-    h.write_all(per_input_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
+    h.write_all(txin_sig_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
     h.finalize()
 }
 

zcash_primitives/src/transaction/txid.rs

@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ fn transparent_digests<A: transparent::Authorization>(
     bundle: &transparent::Bundle<A>,
 ) -> TransparentDigests<Blake2bHash> {
     TransparentDigests {
-        prevout_digest: transparent_prevout_hash(&bundle.vin),
+        prevouts_digest: transparent_prevout_hash(&bundle.vin),
         sequence_digest: transparent_sequence_hash(&bundle.vin),
         outputs_digest: transparent_outputs_hash(&bundle.vout),
     }
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ pub(crate) fn hash_transparent_txid_data(
 ) -> Blake2bHash {
     let mut h = hasher(ZCASH_TRANSPARENT_HASH_PERSONALIZATION);
     if let Some(d) = t_digests {
-        h.write_all(d.prevout_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
+        h.write_all(d.prevouts_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
         h.write_all(d.sequence_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
         h.write_all(d.outputs_digest.as_bytes()).unwrap();
     }